For not writing poems so much ur pretty pretty good! I liked this poem! I can relate to it....take care! :)
NaNa

WOW, I love the rhyme! Amazing write, stay strong
xx

This is an outstanding dark poem which procliams the truth that we cannot escape darkness whithout Ligtht great job5+

darkness= depression
Light = Good
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Good
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Wow loved it - 5/5 keep writing n keep your head up :) xXx

so powerful and graceful and lovlely all at the same time

amazing.

This is a really good poem but i think it could be improved with a better flowing rhythm to it. Beautiful concept though.
-A

Aww This Is Soo Sweet 10/5
Oh and Thanks For answering my post, I really appreciate it :)
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