This is beautiful, it came from your heart. Keep writing, I really liked this one.
Satuxxa

Kind of cool 4/5

Nice. Please write more.

i love this poem! (i love all of ur poems) there soo open and beutiful.

Ah Splendid... Good work in combining the two sisters... not so bad. I'm interested in "god's two children." Is that refering Christ and Satan?

Very powerful piece! Well done~Holly

God's two children would be the mixing of many races...

I love this poem, it has so much meaning. Great job!
~Anna~