Awesome, I just love the emotions oozing from the words. Especially liked the last line a lot. Finally, a REAL, good DARK poem! (thanks for all the wonderful comments on my stuff, you truly have talent by the looks of your pieces as well!)

Awesome, I just love the emotions oozing from the words. Especially liked the last line a lot. Finally, a REAL, good DARK poem! (thanks for all the wonderful comments on my stuff, you truly have talent by the looks of your pieces as well!)

Wow, that was really really good and i liked it alot. well done and thanks for commenting on mine. about my poem "attention seeking" the girl i wrote it about..I've asked her so many times what is wrong with her but all she does is reply with sarcasm and she wont give me a straight answer. There is not much more that i can do, i have already told her so many times that im here for her when she needs me. i guess now, i just gotta wait till she is ready to talk about it. Take care xx

That was amazing, keep it up your a really good writer,
Love always,
Elissa

great poem.. I voted a 5! please check out my poem "Butterflies" please comment/vote.. thanks a lot..

awsome and very weird but in a good way i promise.... loved the way you put the words together!!! 5/5 Heather08

i liked that alot ..its kewl... hey go check out mine plz!.. thx L8R

Cool poem really well writen great stuff bye x

Beautiful. This was a great poem by a great poet. It swallowed me whole cause it has my soul. Perfect! I enjoyed reading every line of this poem and Ill soon read it again. 5/5 and sweety try to fix that "stong" i think you ment strong. well keep writing and hope to see more. - Mario AKA Ace Of Hearts

Such talent...wish i could write dark poems...but my poems are all too similar.

Very nicely written, great choice of words. Well done.
Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx