Comments : The Line in the Sand

  • 19 years ago

    by Eden

    Once again, a really good poem. You are really good with expressing your emotions in your poetry. Keep it up. I can't wait to read you next one :)

    Eden

  • 19 years ago

    by |-Turkeylove-|

    Awesome! you should never be afraid to tell people who you are. keeping yourself inside doesn't help you. remember that nick!
    i loved it, and i also can't wait for the next one.
    with much love and a hug,
    krista j.

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That cool. It almost reminds of something. Still it's a good poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    i really lked yur poem about theline its really good
    by the way i changed my email it now is exoticlatinachik@hotmail.com
    ok flame boy
    love cool girl
    by the way teach me italian more
    chow