So short, but every line was on track.... perfect lines! I LOVED it! Nice job, Holly. 5/5

Love you
Heather

Excellent poem, Holly. It makes a lot of sense, I can relate. Keep it up! 5!

I love the flow of your poems Holly, short, to the point and written beautifully, please keep writing, Love, Tim

Wow thats a cool poem kinda reminds me of ozzy. I realy liked the second a fourth stanza's
Dave....

Wow, that poem was simple but it had so much meaning underneath, great job
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