i like this poem even though is some bits you need to focus on rhyming its still good to me

keep your head up
luv bianca

wow that was an amazing poem. you can really feel the emotion.100/100 keep up the great work.peace

Hmm, that was good, though it still needs some more work on it. I liked the idea a lot though, keep writing,
Satuxxa
p.s It was nice chatting with you earlier today :)

really liked your poem keep up the good work

its was pretty good.You are a awesome writer.keep it up
love patricia

WOW!
that was great!
<3