Comments : Secret crush

  • 18 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    i like this poem even though is some bits you need to focus on rhyming its still good to me

    keep your head up
    luv bianca

  • 18 years ago

    by lover girl

    wow that was an amazing poem. you can really feel the emotion.100/100 keep up the great work.peace

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Hmm, that was good, though it still needs some more work on it. I liked the idea a lot though, keep writing,
    Satuxxa
    p.s It was nice chatting with you earlier today :)

  • 18 years ago

    by chris

    really liked your poem keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Patricia Louie

    its was pretty good.You are a awesome writer.keep it up
    love patricia

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsey Paige

    WOW!
    that was great!
    <3