i like.... very good, i dunno wat else 2 say. i wish i culd write as well as u

wow...great poem....

hey thanx 4 the comment, ur poems r reli gud well done keep writin xxx
was sad to read in ur profile that u consider ur knife 2 b ur onli frend, if u eva wana tlk 2 sum1 hu can relate to u then id b happy 2 tlk ne time xxx

hey thanx 4 the comment, ur poems r reli gud well done keep writin xxx
was sad to read in ur profile that u consider ur knife 2 b ur onli frend, if u eva wana tlk 2 sum1 hu can relate to u then id b happy 2 tlk ne time xxx

honestly i think ur really talented..i like ur poems alot...and i hope to read alot more..oh and please dont let ur snail slime me...

Though not normally a fan of rhyming work, this is very good.It's hard to come up with new or unusual rhymes, but you did excelent.More important is the emotional impact.Very powerful, across so sad one can feel it.For one your age, you have a good grasp on the rhythm and style.I thought I had a corner on the melancholy/sad stuff, but after reading your work I can only hope not all is sadness in your life.I always found writing the best way to release the emotions threatening to destroy me with their intensity.Keep up the good wprk.

Good work=]5/5