Hey sabrina this poem is great! I gotta get a new computer and change my email address so i'll let you know as soon as possible ok - Amanda :)

Got a new poem :)

Hey well done, I'm really glad you have found someone. I hoper you are ok, keep writing

The rhyme scheme wasnt consistent and again the flow needs a little help.
It was kind of plain, but it was good.

I really liked that, it was beautiful. The first line made me excited to read the rest! Wow, very good poem. keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa

I really like this poem... it's very cute! I think you could have written it better and it seems as if you have more to say.... but all together I liked it...
~Anna~

A poem of true emotions. Well done as always. Loving this!

Luff yah -
;;Kal.

Well done, Sabrina. Keep writing and keep smiling.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love - Amit.

Beautiful! I hope to feel love like that again some day! Very well done! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke

I have a new one posted. If you would check it out. I am slow to post I can't just put together a poem in minutes like some people on this site. I wish I could! I try! Thanx I love your work by the way!

tahnks so much for writing these awesome poems.. they'll look great in the book
thanks
amanda