A good start to this piece

My suggestions are:

Bleed. (good imagery straight away grabs)
Crimson drops, (again strong)
Crimson streams, (possibly Scarlet streams)
A crimson river, (Ruby river)

I think the use of crimson three times takes away from effect of what reader should be thinking about - using different words for colour would help to give sense of depth. A good start and will read more. Love Rach xx

I can understand your feelings when reading your poems. Not being a cutter I can imagine it when I am reading. You paint a perfect picture. Take Care! Brooke

I really like this poem man its sad but very well done