A good poem although a little too direct... maybe if you had empathised more it would have felt more realistic, but apart from that... excellent

they r both good :)

I like the poem as a hole. Great job >3jess

great poem but sad
gav u a 5 for both parts
peace out
xx hayz xx

for this poem not to be true...it is really really good! nice job keep it up! take care :)

it this a true story

no, it's not a true story lindsey, I just wrote it out of inspiration, not out of experience.

Nice job. Very realistic. Keep the poems coming:)

Hey jess amazing poem :) once again...and dont listen to the negativity in some of the other comments... the poems perfect, it came from your heart and your perspective on the situation.. and you cant write that any diffrent then how it is. keep up the writing, i love your stuff .. bye darlin'

Wow. Is really all I can say.
And if thats real..
I hope that they find who ever did that to you, and well yea. Hurt him.
But really this is a GREAT poem.