The Subconcious, Concious Be

by Daniel Mulvany   Apr 21, 2005


My silent heart holds broken dreams,
Flow through my veins like shallow streams.
Unconscious here these moments pass,
Begun alas to end alas.
But in subconscious dreams appear,
A happiness I wish were here,
A face I've seen, a heart I know,
A feeling ever slow to grow.
But if I open-eyed would see,
And let subconscious, conscious be,
That chance, what chance I've feared to say,
Or open to in any way,
May become such that happiness,
May ever on my heart impress.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Absolutly amazing!!! im really sick of seeing such low ratings.. it isnt right at all......people either are jelouse or have no sence of appreciation for such beauty.. great work again... btw... i absolutly loved these lines...

    "But if I open-eyed would see,
    And let subconscious, conscious be,"

    Keep it Up!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyudmila

    i really liked this one. it's awesome. opens you from a little bit different point of view. Great job.
    ~Lyuda~

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