Excellent poem. Very well written. 5! Check out mine as well.

very scary. now I am scared of the dark...i read your profile it's so funny. i laughed out loud-haven't done that in a while! thanks for commenting on my poem and quote it meant so much to me today.

whooooo luuuuucy!!!! morbid and amaaazing as ever my lambkin! soooo good!!! excuse the strange multiple letters!

that was really cool i love the way you write.
5/5
*allalone*

You portrayed the horror in this poem very well, I like it.

Regards,

Steve