Comments : Theatre of War

  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, The battle, now three times fold.
    One for your heart, two for your soul, and
    the last battle that saves, just say…. NO!!!

    “Not one person could dive through my depths
    I hollowed my world in more cigarettes”
    This makes me think of the smoke screens
    we put up so people cannot see are true pain.

    Theatre of War, fought behind closed doors.
    Life is what we make it. Win the war, open
    the doors and take and say Charge!!!
    Excellent, Write On.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Very well expressed. Nice write, Excellent!!!~
    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    amazing write, i love it!