Amanda, Well written and so sad. Sweetie, my heart goes out to you and I know these memories hurt you so bad. I'm so sorry. hugs, love ya bunches, *Ann*

Sorry Carr, I addressed this to Amanda, I had just read some of her poems, guess I had her on my mind. Ann

I Loved It I Gave You a 5 Beautiful!! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

wow this is one of my favorite poems on this site. I feel your pain, and I have been through that. YOu are an amazing writer, please never stop. I;ll be adding you to my favorites, and looking out for more of your poems

keep writng

lyss

Wow, thanks, all of you... I really appriciate your comments. You guys made my day!
Car

Oh I am so sorry you had to go through something that awful. I have never even come close to something so horrible.
Anyway this poem was excellent. I could feel the emotion all through the it.
~anne~

Thanx, all!

Oh My Gosh! I LOVE This Poem! Your A really Talented Sould, And Darlin' If You Ever Need To Talk, There's Always God, And Me. I'm A Good Listener.. Wow, I really really like this poem, i'd give it higher than a 5 if i could! i'm putting it on my favorites!

wow, thank you!

Great poem....full or fear and regret; it reminds me a lot of my past. You did a wonderful job bringing the past to life...be happy you've moved on and are at a better place!

That was sooo sad!!! i have never ever came close to anyone hitting me cept my syblinings that must be really hard. But hang on! It is gunna be ok.... You have such a talent...Keep writing and check out some of my poems if ya want.... there prolly not as good as that one but yea.... ummm bye...... xoxo

WOW! This was so very sad. I am so sorry you had to deal with that from your father. Great poem and keep your head up sweetie.