Wow I really liked that it was different such a unique idea! I always enjoy a poem when the style is just a little different! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke

This poem is deep but i dont know what the purpose for it was

Very deep and full of emotion.. I loved it and the creative sense to it.. 5/5.. keep writing and take care(always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Very intresting I would have used some other words but very good try take care and will be looking at more of your work check out Sunrise Of death and tell me what you think ok..

Nice job man there is talent

5/5

Excellent poem! I really liked it! I sometimes feel da same way! ♥

wow that a really good poem

I really liked the poem, until the very end. The ending just seemed a little bit rushed to me. Sort of like you didn't know where else to go, so you decided to finish it. But, other than the ending, the rest of the poem was excellent. Very unique way of explaining things, and setting the atmosphere. Nicely done.

wow is that a song.....its really enjoying to read well done :) unique is right

Weird, I've heard of rag doll, but voodoo doll? thats unique. The ryhme is typical, and the two ideas has a form function thing...you know? anyways, It is a little creepy, but good. I enjoyed reading it. I can tell you put time into your poem.