oh Liz, i hope you come around and feel better. Know Jehovah is with us.

Yep the line perfectly fits the poem...
I'ts a good read..You're a talented writer my friend..
keep it up!
;-)

I love the way you are using poetry to help yourself thru the healing process. It makes for great reads!

Good point behind the poem, but the poem itself could use work. The flow twinged a bit. Sometimes it almost worked, but then it would be off again.

Also... your poem concluded twice. After the sentence "no more fake smiles," and after "Recovery's hope."

It's not easy to take a poem and make it solid the whole way through. You just need to get your thoughts down in an organized way.

ya that poem was hard for em to write anyway- because im not really doing well in recovery... i just tryed to think of something nice to say lol