it is nice that you wrote a lot in few line but some parts had me confused keep writing though

Here's the meaning of this poem since no one seems to understand it:
Thy soul lingers on---> someone i really loved passed away, and though they arent physically with me their soul is
Behind the veil of nature----> this line is harder to explain but their soul is sorta "behind nature' so you cant see the soul of the loved one but you feel it.
Keeping my hearts key-----> even though the loved one died, they still have my hearts only key and no one else can come into my heart...
i hope you could understand that better, i know its confusing. I was hoping people would understand this poem in their own way...
Satuxxa

Brilliantly written..
Nice touch you have.
Wish I could write a haiku..
oh well..5/5
All the best to you!
;-)

its vague yet so beautiful and meaningful i loved it very short and sweet with a hint of the unknown awsome work >>5/5<<
bec

Interesting poem:) I liked it and thank you for the describing it for us:)

Love,
Libby

WOW! really good job, its interesting nd I love the "inner meaning" I havent read a poem like that forever! Gret job!

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Very nice. The depth you bring through in your writing continues to astound me.

wow so much in 3 lines!!!!!!!!!!
ps i LOVE finland!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great haiku!!!! *mwah*