sweet poem

thats really good 5+

this poem rocks!!!
If the love is true it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks
keep up the good work

You really expressed your true feelings! It's to bad you guys can't be together. Maybe one day it will happen! Off to read part 11! Take Care! Brooke

nice poem... i can totally rel8.. older men are so much better! its unfair that boys mature slower than girls do

***** Stars... very good!! //September

This is a good poem, yet I feel that the rhymes were much too forced...

Some of them seemed to only be there in order to make the whole poem rhyme...

Very important thought behind it, though, and it makes you think...

Keep it up

aww this poem makes me sad....Great write..maybe one day right? <3333

excellent poem, very well written. As most everyone else, I can definately relate to this. take care.