Nada thanks I changed the line a bit

Cool thanks tryed 6 ways to spell it and failed

The pace of this was abit off so I gave it a four. But the message was clear and well conveyed good job. I like that you can see both sides of the coin if you ever need subjec6ts I got a game we could p-lay. email e and I will tell you about it. Trust me it will be challenging!!! Take care ...

this seems to be lacking quite a bit in comparision to part 1. and the emotions are disconnected
~Freak~

and this is what life is *sigh* so sad....brilliant poem. Peace! //ari\\