wow, thats pretty good. thanks for the comment.

-no more

I'm sorry for your lose and you made me cry.....It was extremely well written and i absolutely loved it, so beautiful and sad... 5*

tears are actually stinging my eyes, and that doesnt happen very often with poetry. i am very sorry for your loss and i do hope you can see yourself through. keep up the writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16
ps: thanks for the comment on my "I'm In My Tears" poem, it'll help a lot when i edit it!

omgsh..that was beautiful and so sad..haha i am in tears as i write this to you..wow..keep on writting that was wonderful..5/5

Who cares if some idiots are jealour and are giving you 4's as ratings. Your doing a tremendously wonderful job expressing how you feel. Good word usage and God Bless!
Hina~

That's so sad. My grandpa passed away as well and it brought back memories and a tear to my eye. You did a great job writing this poem! Take Care! Brooke

i like how you turned this ordinary poem-plot into a personalized poem. great job, but you need to work on the flow a bit.

my grandaddy jus died like four months ago... i know how you feel... i jus wrote a poem bout him called "Searching" and i wrote two other about him when he first died in august check em out if you want to.. i know how your feeling and it sux.... good poem

So sorry about your loss. Beautiful poem, it touched my heart.
Take care,
-Shell x

I love this poem, it great, keep up the GREAT work!

that sounds alot like my grandpa but he didn't die in a comma all i can remember is him telling me he loved me and told my mom to take care of his baby girl

This is a good poem! I love it!

very good!! keep it up.. =) I voted a 5!! hugs

Solid and expressive content, well done.

A very loving and heart felt poem your grandfather would be proud...

omgosh. thats such a sad poem. i loved it!

i loved this.. it was so deep n touching.. very heartfelt.. im so sorry bout this..i lovd evrything bout it.. especially the rhyme..this reli isnt the end..
beautiful..
keep up the faith

Very sweet. Keep writing...It's a great release of emotions.

Beautiful poem! You expressed so much emotion, and i truly empathize with your situation. I especially love the last part, just keep focusing on the "more" that Jehovah has in wait for us, our hope for the future. Especially when he will wipe all tears from our eyes. pm me some time!
Agape from GA