Very well written, Heather. Like always. but Lost Love?
5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

Awww...that was beautiful. :*( Really well written. Great job. 5/5.
Take Care.
Always, Danielle.

nice poem thanks for commenting on mine. i realli like ur use of rythm n words. Realli good

MaTt

That is one of the best poems ever
the words and sentences you use are just amazing
5/5

great lovely, lost love poem. hope your doing ok! enjoy reading your poetry like always!

PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

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Lola, sweetheart, if you could only spell, I would of read that.

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I just thought I would throw this up for some pondering.... I thought that the comment feature on this site was for constructive critique, not arguing and name calling... Further more, the comments should have nothing to do with the topic of the poem. In all truth it should be a comment on the structure, word usage, feelings conveyed, and so on and so forth.
I thought the poem was very well put together Heather.... keep up the good work.

This is so well written and beautiful, I love it. I am coming out of the trauma and the wounds are healing fast,that is GRACE for me, Had one bullet removed but it is healling. Thanks for the Love,
Ur friend, Cleo

Haha. I guess you could say that.

AAwwww Heather that made my stomach sink!!!!! HOLY MOLY! It's too early in the morning for this...lol....Excellent writre ...as always! I hope this is true? About a certain someone? I hope all is well!! 5/5 Take Care:)

How did you write to me in green Miss Lady?

I love it! so original!!! good work ur poems rock!!! take care

always sammi
xxx

dang heather you use too big of words. lol. but its a good poem. so, good job.