:*( That was really good. Very well wriiten.. I hope you're alright... Keep up the Awwmazing work....
Take Care.
Always, Danielle.

Excellent write, very good piece of writing... organized and professional...
5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

Oh, very well written, the first stanza captivated me & the rest proceeded to fulfill me as well....beautifully penned 5/5

love
Heather

this poem is realy great!! i like it so much!! you have the gift of a poet!!

Very amazing, I loved the way it flowed.. I can also relate in many ways... Keep your head held high.. take care ((always) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

i love that..great concept and beautifully written. :)

WOW.....that was amazing. Beautifully written and well thought out. You are extremely talented. I hope life starts treating you like you deserve it to.

Take Care,

Jesse

Awesome metaphor and it's very true, i'm going through a similiar thing right now as i'm sure your aware....I hope you remain this strong and in the end i know all this suffering will be well worth it 5*

wow, great poem! Keep up the good work! Wanna see more! lol

thats gr8 i loved the endin 5/5 hope u feel better soon hunni it will pass xxx

wow, that poem was awesome. I love how you wrote it. Very,very well done. I'll give you props for this one. <3333

Really like the poem, It has good meaning behind it and we all feel that way sometimes and the ones who have never been through this are the lucky ones.
You're a really good writer keep it up and let that emotion out.