Maybe they dont know because you wont open to them hey it works I think nice poem maybe you can read one of mine.

They tell me that im "beautiful"
And it doesn't make me mad
But they don't see what im seeing
So they don't know why it makes me sad

---you handled the simplicity of it very well in that stanza (my fave btw) and oh, line 17 should be atteMpt*

anyhow, 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig.

Sad...but GREAT poem!!!! It was very well written! Great job jessie!! **HUGGGGGGGGGGGGG** =)

-Jason

Superb poem, Jessie. Very Well Done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.