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OH Holly, I think this is your best yet. I loved how you used such simple words but it still made the poem so gorgeous!! Wonderful job sweetheart! 5/5

Love Always
Heather

Beautifully written. Very meaningful and the words flowed nicely. 5! Keep it up, Holly!

Wow Holly, I am in awe of this one..the visions I can imagine..mm mm mm thanx for writng such a beautiful poem. Love, Tim

Holly, yet another masterpiece but "Surrounded by the galaxies
only you and me.
Twinkling in the heaven's
for all eternity." was my favorite part
5/5
Dave.....

Beautiful poem. I talk to your brother Anthony alot online, he told me to come check your stuff out. Looks like another one added to my fave list!

beautiful, i know exactly how that feels.."i want to sleep forever because it hurts to be awake"...great job :)

Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Amit.

Holly, This is one of the prettiest poems that I have read in some time. The wording and the flow just beautiful. I truly love it. A masterpiece, for sure. Great job, hugs, love, *Ann*

That was a beautiful poem keep it up!

Dreams are wishes your heart makes when your asleep, that poem sums it all up. Brill! U got talent girl! Luv Gem x

wow seriously amazing, i love it...especially since thats exactly how i feel right now

Wow that was a really great poem great job!!!!!! i just wrote one myself u should check it out!!

Wow this is an amazing poem. I absolutely love the imagery. <3 Definately adding to favorites.