nice poem.you have a great style of writing.i luv to read any of your poems.
5/5
Tes

Very well expressed, nice write.
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

incredibly constant flow of thought climaxing into one metaphoric theme.. good stuff!!

great poem... well written

hey....it was really good...you have a talent...i gave it a 5/5
//.:amanda:.\\

like that poem you have a great style and a grate tallent

Jacs
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