oh so sad...but the poem is beautifully written...i can feel the longing for a dad too...good luck my frnd...don't worry everythings gonna be alryt...

THis shows great emotion, meaning it is very well written. I can relate a little bit. Keep Writing! i enjoy your poems!

~girlii797

hey, what's up? nice poem (i'm also, girlii797, and 4evercared4...on this website).
Thanx for comments i like your poems!

Wow i really enjoyed this... very well written....5*

Very well written! I liked the style of this poem it was unique. Always love the unique poems. Sad poem with a good feeling of emotion! Thanx for the comments on mine! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

I really like this alot, it leaves me wanting to know more....
5/5

that is really touching

Aww so sad. Sorry about your dad. 5/5. Thanx for the comment on my poem!

much love
savannah

this could have a biblical setting to it. I liked the idea but it seemed to read abit choppy oh well good attempt...

This is a really emotional poem. Great job! 5/5. Love Emma xxx

wow..loved it ,alot. keep it up.that was very very good. 5/5

Shannon<33

Good job. I liked the overall feel of the poem. Keep writing!

omg.... beautiful. im speechless

this is such a lovely poem way to go girl

such a sweet poem but i didnt understand the aim of it u blaming ur father or missing him

Good job..5/5

How touch....its express how much u love ur father very nice poem. keep it up ok god bless!