i know how ya feel wishing it would stop but never ending

short but powerful
very sad 5/5

I honestly like the way you used 'Ocean of Tears' in your poem...
Fits well with idea of the poem.
Good job!
;-)

short but wonderful

Short, painful... Yet still lovely.

I really like this poem. Short, but very powerful. I know the feeling 5/5

simple & short! very creative! i like it-like it! 25/5 =)