you're lucky. i wish i could find a guy like that. GREAT poem=) -hOlly

Excellent write, Liz... extremely well expressed...
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

Sweeet.
Beautifully done...Everybody needs to be in love...
Good job!

That was beautiful, it reminds me of how I feel about my husband. 5/5 definetly!

That is so beautiful, a perfect love poem.....Got me to think about my boyfriend!!! Love it!!!

another great poem..5/5 amazing..you have a talent. keep it up.

shannon<33

Wow another really good poem!!! keep it up!!!

awww... this one is so sweet. good poem. i think what you lack in meter and rhythm (which are usually a big deal to me), you make up for in emotional control... you have a lot of power in your words. keep writing more like this.