Hi there, i thought this poem was good, it has a lot of truth in it. if you don't mind a little critism, i think you could use more figurative language, and describe things a little more.

I saw that you had commented my poem a few months ago...i havent been on in a long time...just though i would get on...i do love this poem and i hope outhers find it as enjoyable as i did...keep up the good work

Powerful events of injustice in your poem. nice work, like to ending - Holy Nation. :)