Depressing Cutter

by Bleed-Like-Me   Apr 26, 2005


Candles lighting
This dark life
Shining greatly
On the glaring knife

Her heart is swollen
True also to her eyes
Beaten and bruised
Left with no pride

Her nail polish chipped
Though she can hardly see
Due to the darkness
And her eyes, which are darkening

The silence is only broken
When her breathing starts to sigh
Not knowing happiness
Only of wishes to end her life

Candle's lighting
This dark life
Shining greatly
On the blood stained knife

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Im not trying to tell you what to do or anything but i think that its really good but theres one part that doesnt rhyme.(The silence is only broken
    When her breathing starts to sigh
    Not knowing happiness
    Only of wishes to end her life)and "I THINK" that it would sound better if you change ' only of wishes to end her life' to ''only wishes to die''.... i just think it clicks better but its your poem so its your choice. but i still loved it greatly! it made a lot of sence and i understand it completely!
    -thornton

  • 18 years ago

    by RebeccaPower

    Thanks for the comment. This is an awesome poem. Much related to me. Keep up the good work.
    Becca

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