cool, wonderful poem! good thing poetry is something you can do when your bored, and in class, i know how it is :)

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

Heather, you are very creative when your bored one again YOU ROCK!!
5/5
Dave.....

ahhh another masterpiece. this is fabulous and wonderfully written at which i can also relate. this is nothing less than a five...

love always <33

awesome 5/5 is all i can say really

Another beautiful and heartfelt poem written from your heart for a friend that is hurting. You have such a beautiful and loving heart for those you care about. I love you Heather, you're truly a sweetheart. hugs, love, *Ann*

wow, the poem was so complex but it all came down to the simple message of the pain inside invisible to everyone else. i loved it. good job
trevor--

Great poem. Keep it up.

I wish I was that creative when I'm bored! About all that comes out of my boredom are nice, leisurely naps...lol! What can I say? Beautifully penned as always~Holly

*claps*..awesome poem heather, as usual lol...keep up the amazing work...love you lots and lots lol...take care ~much love~ ~many hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

wonderful, simply lovely!!! I get bored at school all the time too!!! LOL

love n light
Sammi
xxx

Wicked cool poem. It was excellent.

My My, That was amazing...I love how you can write just about any ol' thing and come out with something like this..Pure gold! You decribed it so well and your poem was VERY well written! ALways your fan heather,
~Chelsey~

Hurting inside but nobody can see -- that's me. You just write all the right things. Great job!

Well done with this one too, Heather. Keep writing and keep smiling.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Amit.

Hey Heather : )

Viva that Dream !

more than Excellent! i loved your Idea,i hate being hurt inside,Gosh i really hate that feeling.

TAke Care xox
Peace
Rua Francis.

Beautiful poem Heather.... I won't give you any physics lessons this time... last time I did that my example actually happened... so mabey if I keep quite no one will get hurt this time! LMAO
Aaron

I ike your poem, good use of words