Another excelent piece from you Robert. I look on your work as some of the strongest on this site. Love Rach xx

Very nice...You have a nice touch in your poem.Seems like it is very clear, very smooth.
Like it a lot.
All the best to you.
5/5

Awesome, you know what you are talking about! Thanks for your comments on my poem.
He loved it.
Cheers, Frankie

It was a good peom. There was a misspelling in "hate" somewhere in the middle. Good poem though. 4/5.

very powerful... i really enjoyed reading it.

great poem! 5/5

"Every person has lock away tight,
a demon from time to time they must fight."

^^Favourite lines. So much power and depth, with great imagery.

There were a few spelling errors in this, which took away some of the emotion that could make this an AMAZING piece.

The imagery in this was beautiful, so detailed and vivid.

I thought in places the flow was shaky, but was okay for the most part.

Great structure and wording, love the flow xxx alex xxx

This is another good poem...i liked it... the flow on this one was good...

"Every person has lock away tight,"

^^in this line you might want to change "lock to locked"

good work.5/5