Expressive and very well written, Deadnalone, Excellent use of rhyme there, and very organized write. Keep writing and keep smiling.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Amit.

Great poem. Loved the way you repeated some stanzas, it was really interesting to read. Good job.
Take care,
- Shell

Oh hun...an excellent poem, i loved it..i really hope your ok and that he gives you some answers v soon! B careful plz hun. I care abt u! xxxxxxx

wow....excelent, and dont let a guy mess with your heart babes....its not worth it.....i love and miss you!

Wow, great job. I loved how you kept everything flowing. Really nice. 5/5

thanx :)

great poem. i absolutely loved it. defintaly a 5. keep up the work.

This is a very good poem. Keep it up!

Rebecca.