wow. i really liked this poem alot. there was alot of emotion, great job

So sad but good

Wow, what do i say? very good

Very good poem i liked the flow to it you got talent 5/5

Aw this is so sad but i know exactly how you feel....5/5

I loved this poem i love how you put your little brothers situation in here cause thats the part that made me feel for this poem very touching...didnt like the ending coulda been better 5/5 anyways great job