YAY!! i love this one!! good job on this one!!!

awesome poem.
5/5!!
Jenn.

Great flow and rhyme scheme. thatnk u for commenting on mine

First let me say WELCOME TO THE CLUB!! :)

And now I will say that was awesome. Saying goodbye shouldn't be a sad thing and I'm maybe thinking this poem doesn't belong in the sad category.

You show saying good bye as not being a bad thing. I like that.

Nicely written! :)

Beautiful. short and sweet and to the point. A lot of emotion wrapped up in a few words. This was great. I love the way your going to say goodbye, It's wonderful to have such positive people in the world. Keep up the good work.

Take care,
Renee

Wonderful job!!!

Very well said. i didnt feel emotion like in the other poems u write but it was still good. the shotness felt like a represetnation of how long goodbyes should be. good poem. 5/5