That was awesome, really well written. can't wait to read you next poem. oh and check out the new poem i submitted harley
love always your friend,
Elissa

dont ever kill urself if thats what u were thinking, it is never the answer, ive known 2 many pl who did that, it just made things worse, awesome poem though
<3 maymay

Hey i really liked quiet a few lines in here. they meshed and connected together really well! Gave me good imagery.. but not if you know what i mean, keep it up
Kt xx

I love this poem so much. i can really relate to this!! good work