awww, this is so sad and yet you have written beautifully...i love it. wonderful poem. i love you!!

Brilliant poem...i hope your ok tho xxxx

Okay but not exactly wowing. Still better than others I've seen.

heyy sweetie!! i havn't talked to you in so long.. good job on the poem, i hope youre okay! im always here for you.. email me or im me anytime! i love youu!! keep on writing xx

OMG!! I l-o-v-e it! wonderful job. great visuals. Thanx for commenting on mine 2!! means alot. keep up the terrific work.