holy shit! that was just...wow.....im speechless....i especially loved this part....

I think you think I'm lost
I think that you are right
I believe you know the truth
help lead me to the light

the closer I think you are
the farther it seems you get
you will leave me stranded here
I’ll remember every bit

that was amazing....and you are an amazing writer.....keep it up =)....take care ~much love~ ~many hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

the closer I think you are
the farther it seems you get
you will leave me stranded here
I’ll remember every bit

---By far, my favorite stanza in it!--Nice job, keep it up!

Love ღ Always,
Heather M Craig

The spelling was off abit were should be where. You also jumped around too mych in your characters so you really couldn't understand what they said. I think with a bit more detail and alot me focus on who was talking this would be a great read good attempt will look around for some more...

Nice poem.