by Amit
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Excellent Write, Heather. But... Why? |
by Natalie84
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That's pretty creative! .... |
by Ann Stareyes
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Nice job, Heather. Creative using the 5 senses. Hope everything is O.K. now. Love ya, hugs, *Ann* |
by Dark Savior
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pretty much sums it up heather. |
by Amit
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Yes Heather, I too thought so! But how did it happen? Is it okay to talk here, or we should talk by email? |
by Amit
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Sure, Heather. Tell me what happened to albert! I'll wait for your email. |
by Andrea
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ooh i like this very much...full of emotion, its wonderful and brilliantly stunning writing. i love it...5/5 |
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hey heather that is great i gave u a 5/5 exellent job |
by Chelsey
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Heather you are so sweet! You are always thinking of others and dedications like these shows you a lot! You are a wonderful poet with everything you write..And I do mean everything! Keep up the terrific work! |
by Bizarre
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HeHe that's pretty cool. good job. *5 |
by christina
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grt poem hunz:D |
by Angie
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Lots of emotion and beautifully written. Great job once again. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by GoodMorning
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aww heather....im sorry things didnt work out =(....im here if you wanna talk or anything...but im sure you have plenty of people to talk to lol...i like how you used the 5 senses as well, very creative....this is another brilliant piece of work =), keep it up...take care ~much love~ ~many hugs~ |
by Becky drake
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Heather |
by Trevor
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totally beautiful, sad but its admitting your own faults which is so much harder than laying the blame on others. amazing work. you can write whatever style you want. loved it. |