Good job:) Don't say your poetry is rubbish. It never is:)

Excellent write, Very Well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

This is pretty Good Keep it up!!

I liked how it started, but I think it ended kind of weak...

Well done, enjoyed. hugs, love, *Ann*

Why did you resubmit it??? Oh my God I have a fu**ed up day....I really hate my life!!! Hope that you are feeling better than me???

Love Sabrina

Really good. It wasn't rubbish. 5/5 Can't wait to read more.

-no more

Might be old, might be rubbish for you, but for those with a clear vission, it's very good. nice work.
Tim

Its not rubbish, I thought it was really good well done :D

i have felt the same way you really know how to capture it in writing