Whoa! Very Well done, Timothy.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

This was great

Good job. It has a nice flow. I liked it.

ooo i love love love the ending teamy, its so clever and sad and powerful. keep up the good work
~Freak~

That's so sweet and sad! You have to go after what you want in life if you don't try you will never know what could have been. You showed great emotion! Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~

You write so beautifully! I really enjoy your work! I will have to check out your poems more often! ~Brooke~

Hm, this was a great poem. She must be crazy though, i mean to go for a guy so oblivious of her true self. Plus, she could have you..therefor probably make her life ten times better to know you would care for her. Hope all works well for you, as well as her. Nice job!

-Jennifer.