Comments : Broken Man

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Good poem, wow, another master piece from you, keep it up I am really enjoying looking at all your poetry, well done :D xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Wow...very good, i like it when you tell stories in your poems, the questions make it very powerful as well! Stay strong
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Oh, this is by far, my favorite, I have never read a poem like this before so major props to your creativity! The first stanza lured me in greatly. Great job, Jacklyn! And for some odd reason, I have to point out, my gov't class is doing a mock trial in a lil over a week and I'm playing a lawyer (although for the defense) but i really got into the spirit of this. 5/5

    Love Always,
    Heather M Craig.

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Wow this is unlike any other poem i've read before. It almost placed guilt upon me by just reading it.

    You created an atmosphere within the poem - on of anger and helplessness. I enjoyed reading it!

    Luff,
    ||Kalah.

  • 18 years ago

    by Roni

    WOW... Great poem, I'll have to say this is my new favorite out of your hundred some poems!!!
    5/5,
    Hugs & Love
    ~Roni~

  • awwwwww....that was REALLY sad...but I loved it..it was awesome. Keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Wow! This was terrific. Very well written and perfectly expressed. 5/5:)

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    WO. That one BLEW ME AWAAAAAAAAAY!!!! *WHOOSH* So sad, so beautifully written. Shows that your biggest mistakes can permanently damage some1 else...like the attorney kept saying what you do can't make this boy happy again.....5/5. Thank u for the comment! I always enjoy hearing from you. You are a gr8 friend too! LUV YA ~LIL SLAM~, STAY TITE PEACE!!! //ARI\\

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    not bad the questions were a bit confusing just kinda rolled into one another after a while, but its not bad at all. I love the message, my friend was raped and so i feel a connection with this poem
    ~*Freak*~ thx for the comment btw

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    great poem.. i really like it well done.. and keep it up mwaZ Stephy!! :):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Hot stuff. So sad, but it is so vivid, like being there. I really enjoyed this piece.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    That was an awesome poem. you have told a stroy i'm sure many of us wish we could explain.
    take care...and i was wondering how you came to write this poem?? it's original
    x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    This was a great poem. It had a catchy story and it was just really good. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    Great poen sad but good

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Yup.