Comments : Butterflies

  • 18 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice One, Miss Vicious. Heartfelt and Touching, very well written.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 18 years ago

    by brin macnamara

    A very good if sadly beautiful poem 5++++

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    Very sad poem, but ver nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Beautiful and sad at the same time! Very well done September! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gunjan

    i feel the exact same way
    5/5
    excellent use of words

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    A touching and beautiful poem. Well written, great job, keep it up. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Fireflower

    another awesome poem.. i can totaly relate to that one too.. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by chloe

    awww great poem flows well! thanks soo much for commenting on my poem! x

  • 18 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    Very sad. I love you work! 5/5. Great job and keep it up!

    savannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I liked the idea of the poem, it was simple but touching. i don't really know what to say, but I definitly enjoyed it. the part that goes something like "I want to have butterflies again" or something is totally great, i can so relate to it!! Keep writing, and btw thank you so much for your comments.
    Satuxxa

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    I liked this poem. Very expressive. Although, should "You made me lost a special friend" be "You made me lose a special friend"? I liked the sentence fluency and form of this poem. 4/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    hey... it was really good....and well writen you have a talent...keep writing
    //.:amanda:.\\

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    good poem. maybe you could elaborate on the imagery of the butterfly in the poem, to make it better i mean. thanks for the comment. good write and good luck with your writing.

    -ellie

  • 18 years ago

    by -Erin-

    Good poem ^.^

    Keep on writing and allways believe
    <3Erin

  • 18 years ago

    by -Erin-

    Good poem ^.^

    Keep on writing and allways believe
    <3Erin

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    Great poem. It flowed well. I like it. Thanks for the comment. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristy Green

    thanks for commenting on my poem "in black" and i read some of urs and wow,, ur very talented.. keep up the good work and i look forward to some new ones. i added u to favorites.
    much love
    kristy

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*battered_angel*~

    5/5 wow! awesome poem! keep it up! cant wait to read more of your work!
    fanx for you comment!
    xoxoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Hether

    That was Frickin awsome!!!!! but awsomely sad (dont ask what i mean by that because i have absolutly no idea) well keep up the good work 5/5 Heather08

  • 18 years ago

    by Hether

    That was Frickin awsome!!!!! but awsomely sad (dont ask what i mean by that because i have absolutly no idea) well keep up the good work 5/5 Heather08