Nice write, truly a good job, the flow just beautiful. hugs,love, *Ann*

wow, that was reli great, 1 of my faves that ive red of urs deserves mre than a 5 xxx

its not as good as the boy one. but its still good. one thing though "the tears on my cheek is for real" should be are for real. other than that, good job. 4/5
~Freak~

This poem really needed more of an ending to it to make the point and the sorrw you have justified. I hope you understand. But it was a good read so far...

I enjoyed the simplicity of this. Great job. your message comes across.

Well written and rhymed.

very good! i really like this poem!
luvs always,
Ashli

really good! i really liked the flow, and the content was good...could use just a little work tho!
luv always,
Ashli

I luv this poem ur a good writer and very sad keep up the good work