Comments : Achieve My Fate

  • 20 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    This is amazing my friend. Lines of reflection, remorse, hatred, and 'fate'. Well done,

    ||Kal.

  • 20 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Great poem... very well written. 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 20 years ago

    by Elissa

    Awsome poem, I loved it. can't wait to read your next. 5/5
    love always,
    Elissa

  • 20 years ago

    by Gemini

    wow...amazing