Comments : For you i'll die

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    wow, powerful saddening ending! i liked how you did both points of views for the two people. i'm sorry your friend had to experiance this, must be terrible pain to hold.

    ~best of wishes for u and your friend~

    ~PLP~ lil angel~ hugs & love~

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    This is so amazing, excellent, perfect and well written!!! I'm so sorry for your friend, cheating is the worse thing and especially when it's your best friend!!! I really feel his pain.....You are so right, we never know how powerful love is, it's can ruin so much!!! Great one, as always!!!

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    So much is put into love and relationships and it's a horrible thing for something like that to happen, but every experience is a good one in the end because you take it and learn from it.
    Much love to you and your friend,
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I luv this poem...it's so tragic. I also like how u put it from different points of u and can still hold it together. Yes, the power of love is underestimated, but no one understands that. Maybe if certain people did, not only understanding the power but also the value, they wouldn't cheat. I'm so sorry for your friend, a broken heart will not mend fast, so maybe all he needs is time...? I dunno, can't really speak 4 him, can I? :) It's hard to lose the one your with and to lose your friend all at the same time. Luv U SO FRIKKIN MUCH, KAL, U R A TRU FRIEND AND A GR8 PERSON. lUV, //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    When I said different points of u i meant different points of VIEW. Haha my mistake. :P