Whoa! Amanda, you did this really well! Great poem, very well written!
Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

hey this is really good!! i no the feeling b/c i said those same things and my bf is definatly a distraction!!! keep up the good work this is wonderful and always believe in love!!!
-Britt

Amanda, great poem.....I know how you feel. I loved it....definately a 5.

Take Care,
Jesse

I can totally relate to this. Great job, hun <333 5/5

I truly loved this. Absolutely a beautiful poem. Your words and the flow just superb, a pleasure to read. hugs, love, *Ann*

Hey this is an another amazing piece from you! :)

Once again, a nice piece of work. I look forward to more.

Firstly thank you for your comment on my poem. It made me smile and at this stage it is a hard thing for someone to get me to do!!!!!

This poem was really beautiful! it's so true and it rhymes soooooo amazingly!! i'm looking forward to reading more from you when i get the time!!! keep writing
love n light
Sammi Morris
xxx

ps i love the word entice it's such a strong word!!!! lol

Another magnificent poem! It's so heartfelt and full of emotion! You are an amazing poet....Holly

That is so cute!!!=)=)=)

I love the way you reapeat those words at the end of each stanza, except for the last one..

Great...

Just great

nice, i feel i can relate xox sam

Such a cute poem! I loved it so much! Youre an awesome writter! Keep it up!
Love Sarah

I dont usually read love poems and like them, but this one was AMAZING!! I love the way you wrote it. Great work. <3333

Amanda,

Simply delightful. Lovely poem.

Warm regards,

Steve

Awwwww.....that is so cute
again another great poem
i just love the way you express yourself