I liked reading this, It was so good and you are a great poet. Your work is an inspiration so keep it up! I couldn't find the treasure one but i'll have another look soon. Thanks for all your comments. They are very much appreciated. :)

I enjoyed reading that poem, It flowed very well and kept me captivated right up to the end, very good well done

About your comment about my poem...I did not write this poem from experience, if you checked out my other poems you will realize that this is not the usual kind of poem I write and I just wanted to try something different. I'm sorry you had to judge my poetic ability after you read one piece of my work. Maybe you should explore my other poems before you criticize me poetry. I know I'm a good poet and maybe that wasn't my best piece, but I know I'm not as bad as you say I am. If you don't like my poems, then feel free not to read them! Thanks...LiL One

it was interesting...i'm waiting on your topic for me again.

VERY INSPIRATIONAL...IM SORRY THINGS WENT DAT WAY FOR YOU...OR EVEN IF IT DID OR DID NOT...KEEP UP YOUR EXCELLENT WORK...DA POEM CAPTIVATED ME ALL THE WAY THROUGH...5/5 U HAVE A TRUE GIFT CONTINUE WRITING...

very good

i would have given it a 5, but the spelling mistakes really put me off. you have to work on those because with them there, they disconnect the entire thing i had to read a few lines more than TWICE to make sense of it. other than that its very good and very sad. i hope its not true.
~Freak~

very interesting! great poem once again....yet very expressed written, 5/5. take care.

love freedom,
clouds.~

again i loved it and duno what to say
keep up your writing
your very tallented.

Jacs
xxx

I hope this isn't true but if it is I am very sorry! That's very sad. I see you do need some help with the spelling but you have a great poem here! Take Care! Brooke~

This is a great poem. I like it a lot. Great flow, great overall everything. I gave it a 5.

Tiff