Comments : The best that I can

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Well Done David! Such a wonderous Write! Excellent!

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Oh David, this is such a heartfelt poem! The first stanza is simply breathtaking...there are so many other parts of this piece that are amazing as well! Let me just say the entire poem is brilliant~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    As Always, David, beautifully penned. You have such a talent for these love poems! =) 5

    Love Always,
    Heather M Craig

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky drake

    excellant poem, I loved it. you truly have a way with words......Love ya Becky