I dunno bout the title,if u could send some ideas it woud be gr8

by JoJo   May 3, 2005


Shivering in a cold sweat i looked around,nothing but darkness i could see. until suddenly i noticed a figure, draped in black, her bony fingers reached out for me, prying, reaching for something i could not see. i saw her tears falling gently from her eyes slowly turning into a deep red as she cries.emerging from the surface of her skin scars formed rummaging, searching for a meaning in this lost cause, all over her grief stricken face cuts and bruises from her heart surfaced showing her deepest fantasies. i lay there in horror at what was enfolding before me, the sadness and the depression in her eyes seemed familiar it was only then i realized i was looking in the mirror...

xxxby you're guardian angelxxx

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tyler

    Great poem, awesome imagery. I'm not to good about making names for stuff, but maybe you could call it 'the demon inside me'...or something like that. If you ever get bored read some of my poems. Keep up the good work :-)